The Hike The hike was soooo long it felt as if you were going around and around and around and around in circles over and over again you are hot , you need water and shade , until it is the end of the hike.
The repetition of around and around and over and over really helps to illustrate how you felt about the hike. You might want to break up those end lines to make the poem longer...to keep going and going, like the hike.
You are missing your second post. You need to get that done!
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The repetition of around and around and over and over really helps to illustrate how you felt about the hike. You might want to break up those end lines to make the poem longer...to keep going and going, like the hike.
You are missing your second post. You need to get that done!
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